This still doesn't answer the question of the power and role of the Senate. It does not define the powers of the Senate nor does it define the powers of the states.
If you actually bothered to read it (which you clearly didn't considering your response was within 3 minutes of my post), you would see that I will contribute to any debate in the Senate on the role of the Senate and the Regions, but I feel that producing yet another proposal is counter-productive considering the number already on offer.
Yes I have re-read it and did fine the two small paragraphs at the end of it stating that the Senate should rule on an enumeration of powers amendment. Excuse me for not noticing something at the very end of such a detailed post.