Well, I disagree with almost the entirety of this bill, but I'll see if I can amend out some of the worst parts.
I'll start by offering an an amendment to strike out the part about ending all trade and business with Isreal:
8. Effective upon the passage of this legislation, investment by the Republic of Atlasia or any corporate entity chartered or headquartered in the Republic of Atlasia in the State of Israel is hereby banned.
8a. Any and all sales of any product to the Israeli armed forces or Israeli police is likewise banned upon the passage of this legislation.
8b. Atlasian banks may not make loans to Israel or any Israeli institution, effective upon the passage of this legislation.
8c. Agricultural goods, textiles, meat, steel, iron, uranium, and the products of state-owned companies made in Israel shall be prohibited from entering the Republic of Atlasia and any area in which it has jurisdictional authority, effective upon the passage of this legislation.9. 8. Effective upon the passage of this legislation, members of the armed forces shall have the right to organize unions and shall be party to all existing and future labor legislation.
10. 9. Effective upon the passage of this legislation, unmanned aerial surveillance drones shall be banned from use by police departments, the armed forces of the Republic of Atlasia, and intelligence agencies in any area subject to the jurisdictional authority of the Republic of Atlasia.
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