Clicked on this because the title looked very familiar. Bravo. A spectacular review. I am truly honoured, although I do wish to make note that this now-deleted writing was always intended to be a short story, and was written hastily on a night in which I had actually self-harmed, and had come close to taking my own life.
Still, I am very glad that someone had at least read it and was moved so greatly--albeit negatively--to write this well-crafted review.
Lesson learned: never seek advice regarding mental health from people who make maps on the internet
