Opinion of this song

[I spent the winter writing songs about getting better]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K2HUPy87OnE

Unfortunately it's a HS, which is too bad because the message is great. But the vocals are bad and the breakdown doesn't work and is rather Narmy. Which is too bad because what they're trying to convey is pretty awesome and would be if done effectively.

[angus]

gripping.  Bass-driven.  I couldn't quite understand all the gwar-style lyrics, but I got enough of them to appreciate the message.  Needs a slightly more creative (or talented) lead guitar, and the front man needs to work on his rap.  It does seem to lack denouement, and the chord progression is too pedantic and way too redundant, but the bridge saves it.  I'll go with FF, because I kinda like it, but with some reservations.