angus
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« on: May 05, 2016, 11:36:04 AM » |
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mixed metaphor. Either Victoria represents a former employer, in which case he might be crawling back looking for work, or he's the estranged former husband of Victoria, in which case he might be crawling back looking for booty (and a roof over his head). Fix that. Also, I think it was George III who was dumped by Washington. Victoria had not yet been born.
The journal title needs to be sexier. "Countries" just leaves me flaccid. Nations maybe, or States, or International Review. Perhaps those titles are already in use by real magazines.
I'm not getting the reference to the five-pointed star. Is that a communism joke?
Also, the character you have depicted is Uncle Sam. Captain America is this guy:
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