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« on: December 02, 2016, 08:11:50 PM »
« edited: December 02, 2016, 08:26:43 PM by v0031 »

I’m Li Hua. The students are discussing the topic “Do the students of Grade Nine need to do sports or not?

85% of them think it’s very important to keep healthy. We should do sports every day, but not for too long. In this way, we can be much healthier and more active.

However, 15% of them disagree. They believe doing sports is a waste of time. What’s worse, students may get hurt easily. Sports also make them too excited, which have a bad influence on their study.

In my opinion, the students of Grade Nine need to do sports every day. It’s not sitting and studying all day that makes a smart student. Doing sports is a good way for students to relax. After all,a horse runs faster after a good rest.
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