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The Chill Moderate Republican
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« on: June 24, 2017, 01:47:01 PM »
« edited: June 24, 2017, 01:50:01 PM by The Chill Moderate Republican »
I think it would be better if you got rid of the word in red. The reader would still understand the point if you only put a conjunction there. No need for extra emphasis in that paragraph, the conjunction "and" settles all your problems.
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