Yes, both options are available. But the question is not about the person in one case picking either an act or an omission. It's about two persons, one which killed by action and one which killed by omitting in otherwise identical circumstances. Thus, it provides the basis for comparing acts and omissions, don't it?
No. In your version, both persons omitted puling the person out of the water, meaning that the omission is not part of the comparison. The comparison in your version is between:
- Mr. Jones, who prepared to commit an act, but never got the chance to.
- Mr. Smith ,who prepared to commit an act, got the chance to, and did so.