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« on: October 13, 2008, 01:15:04 AM »

it's a world turned upside down
where a tool becomes a crown
it's a world where black is white
and what's left becomes the right
it's all mixed up
all turned around
where no sense is made
where silence is a sound
it makes no sense
guilt's innocence
where back is forth
and south is north
the opposite
where pure is tit
confusion looms
the stoplight zooms
the truth is lie
accuser's alibi
"i've seen it all" the blind man says
the citizen is the country's Pres.
where soft is hard
and muscle, lard
man is girl
to eat is hurl
i've been a friend
but enemy
i tried to help
but will they see
i was the judas
i was the brutus
i stabbed the back
i lost the trust
with love's deep knife
oh did i thrust
tis all the future
but yet the past
how long will the paradox last?
will soon find out the truth?
maybe
or stuck forever until i see
the end is near
but just the start
in hope and fear
i clutch my heart
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« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2008, 01:34:08 AM »

Bennington's on the phone and he's lovin it
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« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2008, 01:35:38 AM »

Bennington's on the phone and he's lovin it

Who?
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« Reply #3 on: October 13, 2008, 01:38:32 AM »


Chester. I'm just being a dick, don't mind me. I think you should try using more creative imagery.
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« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2008, 01:44:20 AM »


Chester. I'm just being a dick, don't mind me. I think you should try using more creative imagery.

That's about as  creative as I get.
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« Reply #5 on: October 13, 2008, 01:52:57 AM »

I actually like it. A lot...

but whats "where pure is tit"..?
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« Reply #6 on: October 13, 2008, 06:43:33 AM »

I really liked it. I opened the thread to read it, but figured I wouldn't post because I try to only post positive comments, but then was pleased to find I really liked it. Really good!
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« Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 10:34:52 AM »

I actually like it. A lot...

but whats "where pure is tit"..?

I figured people might not get that line, but I couldn't think of anything else to go there.  An old definition of tit was a flirtatious girl or a "young hussy."
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« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2008, 02:36:05 PM »

dude that is deep. that is deep wow.
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« Reply #9 on: October 13, 2008, 02:42:18 PM »


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« Reply #10 on: October 13, 2008, 02:45:36 PM »
« Edited: October 13, 2008, 02:47:38 PM by Dc_united_15 »




perfect! that is what was missing. Smiley
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« Reply #11 on: October 13, 2008, 02:54:41 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?
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« Reply #12 on: October 13, 2008, 03:25:10 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?
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« Reply #13 on: October 13, 2008, 05:32:38 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.
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« Reply #14 on: October 13, 2008, 05:52:52 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

What about reactionary art? Or is that not art at all?
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« Reply #15 on: October 13, 2008, 05:55:34 PM »

why not stop thinking about it and just say it is art.
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« Reply #16 on: October 13, 2008, 06:03:56 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

What about reactionary art? Or is that not art at all?

a misnomer, basically
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« Reply #17 on: October 13, 2008, 06:08:26 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

What about reactionary art? Or is that not art at all?

a misnomer, basically

So how would you classify the Pietà, for instance?
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« Reply #18 on: October 13, 2008, 06:23:57 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

So the roof of the Sistine Chapel is not artwork?
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« Reply #19 on: October 13, 2008, 08:44:16 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

So the roof of the Sistine Chapel is not artwork?

logical fallacy: false inference

or maybe not technically a logical fallacy but in the same vein
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« Reply #20 on: October 13, 2008, 08:45:33 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

What about reactionary art? Or is that not art at all?

a misnomer, basically

So how would you classify the Pietà, for instance?

I don't know what that is.  I'm not an art dude in terms of paintings and whatnot.  I'm much more into the written word.
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« Reply #21 on: October 13, 2008, 09:16:05 PM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

So the roof of the Sistine Chapel is not artwork?

logical fallacy: false inference

or maybe not technically a logical fallacy but in the same vein

It's conservative - it conformed to existing belief, the status quo, it wasn't revolutionary. Either art isn't exclusively revolutionary or the roof of the Sistine Chapel isn't artwork.
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« Reply #22 on: October 14, 2008, 12:02:52 AM »

what's the point of creative writing if you're a conservative?

what does creative writing have to do with being a conservative?

art is a revolutionary action.  conservatism is reaction to preserve the status quo.

What about reactionary art? Or is that not art at all?

a misnomer, basically

So how would you classify the Pietà, for instance?

I don't know what that is.  I'm not an art dude in terms of paintings and whatnot.  I'm much more into the written word.

Thing by Michelangelo. You've probably seen it before.
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« Reply #23 on: October 14, 2008, 12:23:23 AM »

I missed the whole point of why conservatives can't be creative.  This has nothing to do with preserving the status quo but simply putting my current feelings into writing in a way other than writing a diary or something.
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