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« on: November 05, 2008, 11:22:18 PM »
« edited: November 22, 2008, 05:59:42 AM by Reaganfan »

I have begun writing a political story about a corrupt Governor running for President, in the form of a movie script. I've gone all guns blazing...so there is some adult content. Tell me what you think...



OPEN: Governor's Mansion, Oklahoma

Governor John Cordell, 53 years old, African American, beard, lays in bed with a young woman, mid-20s, who lites up a cigarette. He turns on the television infront of the bed.


TV ANNOUNCER: President Iverson has officially kicked off his re-election campaign despite polls showing that a majority of Americans disagree with him on his tax proposal which would raise taxes on many American families. Even members of the President's own party have rejected what some call his "socialist" tax plans.

Cordell: Let me tell ya little darlin', when I'm in the White House I'm gonna f*** ya right there in the Lincoln bedroom.
Woman: Governor, you're a class act.

SHIFT FORWARD TO "Cordell for President" rally three weeks later...

Cordell: I'm runnin' for President because I damn well know the American people can't take anymore of this President and his plans to snub the Middle Class!

Crowd cheers

Cordell: I know I'm way out here in Oklahoma and President Iverson might not know much about me...but dammit Jack, people out here sure know how bad you're administration has hurt them and they're not gonna take it anymore!

Crowd cheers

SHIFT: White House, Oval Office

The President of the United States, Jack Iverson, 50 years old, dark brown hair slightly gray, stands near the fireplace looking at a picture of Teddy Roosevelt. Advisor Bill Thomas stands next to him.


Iverson: Cordell is the troublemaker.
Thomas: Sir, polls show Senator Harris far ahead of Cordell in polls...
Iverson: You don't know John Cordell, do you? The man is the biggest crook in all of Middle America. Bigger than cronies in Chicago or New York. That son of a bitch had so much voting fraud...I think he's well aware he didn't win that race.
Thomas: But last year, he was re-elected unopposed.
Iverson: OF COURSE HE WAS UNOPPOSED! That bastard would have creamed anybody we could have put up. I'm telling you Bill...he's gonna cheat his way to the nomination and then cheat his way here.
Thomas: Quite frankly sir, he may not have to cheat his way here.

(BEAT)

Iverson: Leave, Bill.
Thomas: I didn't mean any disrespec-
Iverson: I SAID LEAVE NOW!

SHIFT: Governor's Mansion, Office

Governor John Cordell looks in the mirror, straightens his tie, turns and opens the door. A man is waiting outside the door.


Cordell: PAUL FRANKLIN!
Franklin: Mr. Governor, how are you sir?
Cordell: Just fine Paul, how are things over at the DNC?
Franklin: Better than four years ago!
Cordell: (Laughs) Yes well Iverson keeps giving us everything we need!
Franklin: That's for sure!
Cordell: Sit down Paul, please. Paul...you gotta give me grassroots.
Franklin: What do you mean?
Cordell: Greg Harris...that c***sucker has a lock in the polls and I wanna take him down.
Franklin: Governor, he is the Senior Senator from New Jersey, I think he has the whole gameplan.
Cordell:  F*** what he has...give me what I need!
Franklin: I'm the Chief of Staff of the Democratic National Committee
Cordell: AND I am chair of the National Governor's Association...I can win...I can get us back to 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue...I can and Harris can't! You know that, Paul...you know that!
Franklin: I have to remain independent during the primaries and...

Governor Cordell grabs the tie of Paul Franklin and pushes him against a tall brown cabinet.

Cordell: Now you listen to me you four eyed weasel c***sucker...tomorrow afternoon my Secretary will walk in with a message...a message from you with a number...a number to a list of people who are gonna help me win this f***ing nomination and beat that f***ing son of a bitch. You turn against me or tell anyone about this...and you not only won't be part of the DNC but you won't be part of this planet either....you read me?
(BEAT)
Franklin: We'll be in touch.

SCENE SHIFTS TO WHITE HOUSE ROSE GARDEN, LATE AUGUST

Iverson: Kelly, go ahead.
Reporter: Mr. President, polls show that Senator Harris is currently trailing you and Vice President Quinn by 20 pts. Do you feel that this race will be an uphill battle or easy for you?
Iverson: Kelly...you know...I don't follow polls. I just don't trust them. You may recall, when I was running for Governor of Wisconsin, polls showed me ahead by 15 pts and I won by only 2 so...no I don't think it will be easy...and quite frankly I'm not sure that Senator Harris will even be my opponent.
Reporter: Who do you think will be?
Iverson: Let's wait and see.

SCENE SHIFTS TO INSIDE GOVERNOR'S OFFICE. Governor Cordell is having sex with his secretary, Victoria Neil, a woman, mid-40s, long blonde hair. The phone rings.

Cordell: WHO THE HELL! (Answers Phone) HELLO?!? .... YES HONEY... I HAD TO STAY HERE LATE...IT'S THAT DAMN BUDGET PROPOSAL...I'LL BE AT THE CABIN FOR THE WEEKEND...OKAY TELL THE KIDS I LOVE THEM....LOVE YOU TOO BABE...BYE BYE.
Victoria: That your wife?
Cordell: Who the hell else would it be?
Victoria: When will you keep your promise to dump that bitch and marry me?
Cordell: Honey, I'm gonna be the President in 17 months.
Victoria: Can we have a White House wedding?
Cordell: Sure can.

Governor Cordell lites a big cigar. Victoria buttons her shirt.

Victoria: Oh yeah...I forgot to tell you...some guy called from the DNC...
Cordell: When did he call?
Victoria: Thursday.
Cordell: THURSDAY! It's Friday Night why the f*** didn't you tell me earlier?!
Victoria: I forgot...sorry.
Cordell: FORGOT! YOU DUMB BITCH!
Victoria: Well maybe if you had me being your secretary rather than your slut I wouldn't forget this sh*t!
Cordell: (whispers) Dumb bitch...
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« Reply #1 on: November 05, 2008, 11:31:08 PM »

Oklahoma? African American? President?! Would this movie be a sequal to "My Fellow Americans" or "The Birdcage"?
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« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2008, 11:41:01 PM »



OPEN: Governor's Mansion, Oklahoma

Governor John Cordell, 53 years old, African American, beard,

I'm already cracking up.

Best part - He's a black Governor of Oklahoma.

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I stopped reading the rest but I think we have some great news - the old Naso is back!
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« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2008, 12:05:50 AM »



OPEN: Governor's Mansion, Oklahoma

Governor John Cordell, 53 years old, African American, beard,

I'm already cracking up.

Best part - He's a black Governor of Oklahoma.

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What does that even mean?

I stopped reading the rest but I think we have some great news - the old Naso is back!

Just read it, please! It's fun political fiction!
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« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2008, 12:14:37 AM »
« Edited: November 06, 2008, 12:19:00 AM by Reaganfan »

TELEVISION NEWS REPORT

Reporter: Tonight's look at the candidates will take a look at Oklahoma Governor John Cordell, candidate for the Democratic Presidential nomination. Six years ago, he faced an uphill battle against Incumbant Republican Governor Stan Burchwood. However, Governor Burchwood was marred by scandal and became the most unpopular Governor in the country at that time. Still, the election was close and some say race played a factor in Burchwood's strength. However, Cordell pulled out a narrow victory becoming the first African American Governor in Oklahoma history. Since taking office, Governor Cordell has balanced the budget, cut taxes, and Oklahoma re-elected him all but unopposed last year in the Democratic mid-term Gubernatorial sweep.

Now, he wants to be President of the United States. We sat down yesterday and asked the Governor why he is running for President.

Reporter: Governor Cordell...I know every candidate gets asked this...but why are you running for President?
Cordell: I believe there have been a great deal of people in Middle America who have been hurting under this President and I think that we need real solutions that I believe I can impliment as President.
Reporter: I have a few primary polls for you out of Iowa...a state here in Middle America..a state that went for the Iverson/Quinn campaign four years ago...Iowa Caucus poll shows that for the Democratic nomination you trail Senator Harris by 34 points. How can you compete?
Cordell: It's still early, Bridget, and I know that the people here in Oklahoma and there in Iowa and Michigan and New Hampshire and Florida all have the same cares that I am fighting hard for...and I am very confident that we will do just fine.

TELEVISION TURNS OFF...Scene shifts to den in log cabin....mid-October. Governor Cordell sits on the couch next to his  44 year old wife, Leslie Cordell, and his 10 year old daughter, Ashley Winston Cordell.

Ashley: Daddy...do you really think you can win?
Cordell: Sweetie...politics is a dirty game...and there can be winners and losers. I lost a race for the State Senate way back before you were even born. But sometimes...in defeat...it makes you stronger than you were before.
Ashley: I told my friend Kaitlyn Mustner that you were running for President and she told me her daddy called you a "jackass".
Leslie: ASHLEY! Watch the language, young lady!
Ashley: Sorry mommy.
Cordell: Honey, like I said...politics is a dirty game....a dirty game...
Ashley: Can we make popcorn, daddy?
Cordell: You bet! Why don't you go to the kitchen and get started...I'll be right behind you.
Ashley: Okay! (She gives her father a kiss and runs out of the den)
Leslie: You know she's right, John.
Cordell: About politics being a dirty game?
Leslie: No...about you being a jackass.
Cordell: Very funny baby...

They kiss as scene ends.

SCENE SHIFTS TO A CONFERENCE ROOM IN DES MOINES, IOWA... IN THE ROOM STAND THREE STAFFERS AROUND A SMALL CONFERENCE TABLE WEARING "CORDELL FOR PRESIDENT" BUTTONS. One woman, mid-20s, one man, African American, mid-30s, and one man, mid-20s. Governor Cordell walks in the room.

Woman Staffer: Governor Cordell! How are you?
Cordell: Well hello there, little lady...I'm fine, I'm fine...just gettin' ready for Thanksgiving tomorrow!
Male Staffer 1: Governor it's a pleasure.
Male Staffer 2: Sir, nice to see you.
Cordell: Okay guys and girls...how do we look here in Iowa?
Male Staffer 2: Well sir, we have our office set up here and we are sending flyers out starting Monday...and we have you scheduled to speak at ten events next week.
Cordell: Sounds good, young man.
Woman Staffer: Also, I would mention a brand new Des Moines Register poll shows it 55-35% between you and Harris...but that's a loss of 5 points for Harris and a gain of 4 points for you, sir.
Cordell: That's what I wanna hear...

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« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2008, 02:16:16 AM »

Cut to White House - Christmas Eve - President Jack Iverson stands next to First Lady Jeanne Iverson and 17 year old daughter Rachel at White House party. President Iverson walks over to Senator Nick Alpensi of Pennsylvania.

Iverson: Senator, Merry Christmas!
Alpensi: Mr. President, Merry Christmas, Mrs. Iverson you look marvelous tonight
First Lady: Thank you, Senator.
Iverson: I would greatly appreciate your support this year.
Alpensi: Of course, Mr. President...and we'll deliever Pennsylvania for you and Vice President Quinn again, sir.
Iverson: Vice President Quinn said he was unsure whether or not to stay on the ticket this year and I said, "Hank...we couldn't have won four years ago without carrying your homestate of Utah."
Alpensi: (laughs) By that point...you didn't need to even worry.
Iverson: Yeah, the Electoral Map looked quite good then. Alot better than it does now.
Alpensi: I wouldn't worry, sir.
Iverson: I saw on the news an electoral map scenario...where Harris decimates me.
Alpensi: Nah, I wouldn't worry about Harris.
Iverson: It's not Harris I'm worried about...it's Cordell.
Alpensi: Cordell? Last time I checked he was down 10 points in Iowa.
Iverson: Yeah...but that is 30 points better than a year ago...I saw a report that he opened three more campaign offices there yesterday and was hoping for an upset.
Alpensi: Is he the one you fear the most, sir?
Iverson: To put it bluntly...yes. I think I would cream Harris. We have about ten clips of him talking about how raising taxes was a "good thing to do".
Alpensi: Mr. President...don't worry...this place will be your home for four more years. Merry Christmas.
Iverson: Same to you, Senator.

SCENE SWITCHES TO CHEAP HOTEL OFF A SNOWY IOWA ROAD - Governor Cordell finishes having sex with a young woman and lights up a big cigar in bed.

Cordell: Ah...Merry Christmas to me...
Woman: Don't you have somewhere to be tonight?
Cordell: Ah...I gotta be back to the hotel by nine for gifts and "It's a Wonderful Life".
Woman: It's nice to have a place to go for the holidays...isn't it?
Cordell: Yeah...I guess it is...sometimes I risk it by doing this.
Woman: Why do you do it, then?
Cordell: Because I'm the Governor...I can do whatever I want.
Woman: Even beat the President?
Cordell: ESPECIALLY beat the President!

Silence for a few moments

Cordell: Well...I have to go. Thanks baby...Merry Christmas.
Woman: Merry Christmas, Mr. Governor.

FLASH TO NEW YEARS DAY - NEWS REPORT ON TELEVISION

Reporter: Governor John Cordell of Oklahoma is beginning to feel a boost of momentum on the campaign trail in Iowa.
Cordell: WE WILL WIN IOWA...AND WE WILL TAKE OUR COUNTRY BACK FROM THIS RAW DEAL THAT THE IVERSON ADMINISTRATION HAS THRUST BEFORE US!
Reporter: Cordell has pulled even with New Jersey Senator Greg Harris and some polls even show him ahead just two days before the all important Iowa Caucus.

SHIFT TO ROOM AT CAMPAIGN HEADQUARTERS - MANCHESTER, NEW HAMPSHIRE. A large crowd awaits Governor Cordell as he arrives from a dark and snowy night outdoors. Crowd cheers as Cordell walks in room.

Cordell: WELL! WELL! THANK YOU ALL! WOW...what a great way to start the new year!
Staffer: Governor Cordell, here's your microphone. (Cordell takes mic)
Cordell: THANK YOU! THANK YOU! After we win in Iowa...will New Hampshire deliever for us?
Crowd: YES!
Cordell: Will we go and win this nomination?
Crowd: YES!
Cordell: And will we kick Jack Iverson and Hank Quinn out of the White House?
Crowd: YES!
Cordell: THEN LET'S GET TO WORK AND GET OUT THE VOTE!!

SCENE ENDS

WHITE HOUSE - President Iverson and Vice President Quinn watch cable news networks.


Reporter: With about 65% of Iowa Precincts reporting, the results are still too close to call. Harris currently has 41% and Cordell current has 39%, other minor contenders like Georgia Congressman Kit Huntley have 15% but the real race is of course between Harris and Cordell.

Quinn: If Cordell gets this thing...we're in deep sh**t, sir.
Iverson: I know, Hank...I know.

SWITCH TO HOTEL ROOM IN DES MOINES, IOWA - Governor Cordell and his wife Leslie watch results.

Cordell: I'm gonna win...I'm gonna win...I better win dammit.
Leslie: Honey, you've run a great race anyway...
Cordell: DON'T TELL ME WHAT I KNOW!
Leslie: WHY ARE YOU YELLING AT ME?
Cordell: BECAUSE I DESERVE TO WIN!

REPORT COMES IN ON TELEVISION

Reporter: With 99% of Iowa Precincts reporting...we now project that Senator Greg Harris of New Jersey has narrowly beaten Oklahoma Governor John

Cordell. Tom, let me ask you....is this the end for Cordell?
Tom: I think so Julie..

GOVERNOR CORDELL TAKES A GLASS ASH TRAY OFF DRESSER AND THROWS IT AT TELEVISION KNOCKING IT OFF STAND AND BREAKING IT. HE BEGINS TO KICK IT AND SWEAR IN RAGE.

Cordell: MOTHERF***ING SON OF A BITCH S*** C***SUCKING BASTARD!
Leslie: John, CALM DOWN!
Cordell: THAT C***SUCKING BASTARD DOESN'T EVEN LIVE IN THIS PART OF THE COUNTRY AND HE F***ING BEATS ME...BULL F***ING sh**t!

SCENE SHIFTS TO INDOOR IOWA RALLY ONE HOUR LATER

Cordell: I of course admire Senator Harris and look forward to more tough and hard fought races in New Hampshire and Michigan, and I am confident that I will be the nominee of the Democratic Party and that I will be the next President of the United States!

CROWD WILDLY CHEERS - MUSIC PLAYS - GOVERNOR CORDELL, WIFE LESLIE, DAUGHTER ASHLEY LEAVE STAGE HUGGING AND WAVING

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« Reply #6 on: November 06, 2008, 03:02:35 AM »

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« Reply #7 on: November 06, 2008, 03:16:45 AM »

This is pretty bad.
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« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2008, 09:38:56 AM »

Mike, we are totally making this into a movie.  Best independent film since Juno.
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« Reply #9 on: November 06, 2008, 01:59:36 PM »

Mike, we are totally making this into a movie.  Best independent film since Juno.

Well thanks for the single favorable response, Inks. That's actually what I "intended" it to be...but I doubt of course it would ever happen. Nevertheless, there are so many "real life" fiction stories...I figured something a little different should be added into the mix.

Here are general looks at what each of the main characters look like in my story:

John Cordell - If I ever did make a movie, our good forum pal DemRepDan would be my absolute first choice to play him. I already showed him the story and he liked it alot. So when you read of "Governor John Cordell", picture him as I do...



President Jack Iverson - I see him as similar to actor Tim Matheson from "The West Wing". Middle-age, dark/grayish short hair.

Keep reading...and please give thoughts/opinions on the way the storyline is playing out!
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« Reply #10 on: November 06, 2008, 02:01:07 PM »

I'm actually excited to see where this is going.
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« Reply #11 on: November 06, 2008, 03:33:35 PM »

Naso, why is an African-American Governor of Oklahoma? I mean this is Oklahoma we are talking about.
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« Reply #12 on: November 06, 2008, 03:44:56 PM »

Naso, why is an African-American Governor of Oklahoma? I mean this is Oklahoma we are talking about.

Read and find out.
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« Reply #13 on: November 06, 2008, 03:47:20 PM »

You need to learn industry standard. This is hard for me to read because it's not formatted like a screenplay, but more like a stage play. It also jumps around a great deal. You haven't really developed good characters or continuity.
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« Reply #14 on: November 06, 2008, 04:08:21 PM »

Amusing.
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« Reply #15 on: November 06, 2008, 04:20:56 PM »

Scene Shifts to Staff Meeting in Manchester, NH...five days away from the New Hampshire Primary.

Cordell: Where do I stand now?
Staffer: The latest University poll shows you trailing Senator Harris by 6 points
Cordell: Any other polls?
Staffer: Another shows you down by nine, sir.

Cordell is silent for a moment, then picks up a chair and throws it at the wall.

Cordell: SON OF A BITCH!! That bastard can not win...this nomination is mine not HIS!
Staffer: Sir, we have ads on and we have flyers out but...
Cordell: BUT, what?
Staffer: That loss in Iowa really hurt us.
Cordell: Dammit!

Scene shifts to Senator Greg Harris, 60 years old, balding slightly, sitting at his desk.

Secretary: Senator Harris?
Harris: Yes?
Secretary: We have Governor John Cordell on the line for you.
Harris: (picks up phone) Hi, Mr. Governor...what can I do for you today?

SCENE SHOWS CORDELL IN AN EMPTY CONFERENCE ROOM IN NEW HAMPSHIRE WITH "CORDELL FOR PRESIDENT" SIGNS EVERYWHERE.

Cordell: Senator...remember that intern who helped you out during your first Congressional run?
(BEAT)
Harris: I've had many interns, Governor...why do you ask?
Cordell: This one was a woman...her name was Kate Garfield, remember her?

SCENE SHIFTS TO HARRIS' STUNNED FACE AS CORDELL SPEAKS OVER PHONE

Cordell: She was a 17 year old...not legal yet...not old enough to vote...but she loved politics and wanted to see you elected to Congress. She liked you quite a bit infact...she liked you so much that you took her alone to your campaign office one lonely night 15 years ago and-
Harris: Alright...you listen to me you son of a bitch...I don't know what the hell you think you have on me but you're wrong. That dumb bimbo probably hasn't lived in New Jersey for 10 years and she'd be-
Cordell: 32 years old, married, now one Kate Simon, mother of two, living peacefully as a Sales Representative with her husband Ken in Fairfax, Virginia.
Harris: What do you want from me, Governor?
Cordell: Close a few offices...in South Carolina...become "over-confident" and lessen your campaign staff. Purposely fall behind and let me beat you in the primary.
Harris: What if I said no?
Cordell: Then I'll unleash pretty Kate on your ass and not only take you down in this primary but make you resign your Senate seat in disgrace. I will make your life a living hell.
Harris: (SILENCE FOR A MOMENT) I'll see what I can do.

PHONE CALL ENDS, GOVERNOR CORDELL DAWNS A TOOTHY GRIN AND PUTS A CIGAR IN HIS MOUTH LAUGHING WILDLY

END SCENE

SCENE OPENS ON A SUNNY, JANUARY DAY IN SOUTH CAROLINA. NEWSPAPER HEADLINE READS "CORDELL SURGES IN POLLS IN SOUTH CAROLINA".

Governor Cordell takes questions at a local coffee shop.


Woman: Governor Cordell, the latest national polls show you trailing President Iverson by 8 points...do you believe this race is winnable?
Cordell: Yes, ma'am. Infact, I believe the race is so winnable that I am running for it!
Crowd: (laughs)
Cordell: Senator Harris is a worthy opponent, and I have no doubt that President Iverson has a patriotic love for this country...but it's time to help out the Middle Class in this country. They are hurting...unemployment is at 5.5%, unexceptable in my opinion....and we must do what we can to strengthen our economy and I believe I can do that as President.

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« Reply #16 on: November 06, 2008, 05:35:55 PM »

Governor Cordell looks too much like a thin Al Sharpton to me.
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« Reply #17 on: November 06, 2008, 06:00:25 PM »

This part was actually pretty good.
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« Reply #18 on: November 06, 2008, 07:01:06 PM »

The plot overall is actually pretty entertaining. I think where it's lacking though is the depth and format. It's much too quick moving to be a watchable movie.
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« Reply #19 on: November 06, 2008, 07:19:49 PM »

The plot overall is actually pretty entertaining. I think where it's lacking though is the depth and format. It's much too quick moving to be a watchable movie.

I'll work on that.
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« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2008, 10:59:01 PM »

You need to learn industry standard. This is hard for me to read because it's not formatted like a screenplay, but more like a stage play. It also jumps around a great deal. You haven't really developed good characters or continuity.

Dude, he just started.  Don't be so cynical.  Tongue
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« Reply #21 on: November 06, 2008, 11:02:46 PM »

I think it's good so far.  You will have to fill in some areas so that it's long enough, but I'm totally loving this.
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« Reply #22 on: November 06, 2008, 11:12:58 PM »

Dude, this was funny!
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« Reply #23 on: November 07, 2008, 12:13:56 AM »
« Edited: November 07, 2008, 12:30:59 AM by Obama is my President. »

Is this a porno? Because like half of it is sex scenes.
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« Reply #24 on: November 07, 2008, 11:02:17 PM »

Mike, what happens next?Huh
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