"Cordell for President" - Political Story (COMMENTS WELCOME)

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Amusing.

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This part was actually pretty good.

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Lay off the sex scenes a little.

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Lay off the sex scenes a little.

I'm extremely sorry for the verbal adult onslaught that this story has entrusted onto our forum, but I feel that the verbal text, while sometimes adult oriented, is critical to the flow of the plot of this story.

I can understand that it can be meaningful for character development, but it's not really necessary after the first few times, I think. Perhaps intersperse them more.

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What's with the map?

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What's with the map?

It is a rough image of the electoral map from Iverson's election four years earlier.

Okay. I thought it was a map of current polling, but that didn't make sense.

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What's with the map?

It is a rough image of the electoral map from Iverson's election four years earlier.

Okay. I thought it was a map of current polling, but that didn't make sense.

Nah, sometimes I put a storyboard image with the plot. For that image it's "Cordell and Jessica Norris sitting around a conference table, on wall hangs map from the election four years earlier".

I'll do that occasionally.

Interesting. What'd you make that with?