So, I'm thinking about submitting this poem to my English class for some extra credit; what do you guys think?
I wrote this poem on rock and roll
There’s a darkness on the edge of town,
And all those who were born to run are running.
But they were stopped short of the pink houses,
And they were blinded by the light.
Tuesday’s gone now,
And Dani the girl sings her sad song.
The devil sends his most sincere sympathies,
As the free bird flies away.
The rising has started again,
It’s led by Jude, Jack, and Dianne,
They stroll along the watchtower,
As all the young dudes fight below.
Now I’m losing my religion,
Even though I’m living on a prayer.
I’ve become comfortably numb,
To the street fighting men around me.
I put on my cheap sunglasses,
To cover up my scar tissue,
So goodbye stranger,
I’m taking the long way home.
