I actually like it, except the part where you unequivocally state that they won't change. That is not way to get people to see your way, and it makes you sound arrogant, which will make you look bad in the end.
I like most of the substance, though. I think on the hypocrisy front you should focus more on their silence during the Bush years, rather than whom they associate with.
Einzige isn't going there to make them turn his way. Which they wouldn't anyway even if he tried. He's going there to humiliate them....hopefully with news cameras nearby to watch.