Critique my Essay on George Washington's Farewell Adress

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Lots of fluff. My history teacher would give this a 2.

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Lots of fluff. My history teacher would give this a 2.

Out of?

4.

The IB students cry if they get a 3.

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Lots of fluff. My history teacher would give this a 2.

Out of?

4.

The IB students cry if they get a 3.

Are you one of them?

I am in IB, but I''m not like them.

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Lots of fluff. My history teacher would give this a 2.

Out of?

4.

The IB students cry if they get a 3.

Are you one of them?

I am in IB, but I''m not like them.

I've never really understood what IB's all about.

Smart people from outside the United States generally. If you get the certificate, it's recognized in 100+ countries.

Only Colonel By (public) and Ashbury (rich white kids in Rockcliffe Park) offer it in Ottawa. Colonel By is clearly the best.

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Lots of fluff. My history teacher would give this a 2.

Out of?

4.

The IB students cry if they get a 3.

Are you one of them?

I am in IB, but I''m not like them.

I've never really understood what IB's all about.

Smart people from outside the United States generally. If you get the certificate, it's recognized in 100+ countries.

Only Colonel By (public) and Ashbury (rich white kids in Rockcliffe Park) offer it in Ottawa. Colonel By is clearly the best.

I'm assuming that that's your school.

O rly? How'd you guess?